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A Time and Place

I hear them
sing the sorrow
and give three cheers for
revenge
I followed as the
whitest lace of light
and it lead me to a
place where I belong
oh my beautiful one
that ghost I love
your ray of light
will fizzle out without
hope
what's the worst that
I could say?
so long?
goodnight?
can you hear me?
are you near me?
this is my line
this is eternal
my prayers have disappeared
cause I tried
but I lied
it's in the blood
yet I have never met my love
maybe they'll leave you alone
but not me
I never said I'd lie
and wait forever
but you are never coming home
since we talked alone
come
angels
of
unkown

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  • ghostsinthesnow
    November 15, 2007
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    i love the mcr and afi influence. mcr is like my life. great job


  • neon nightmares
    August 8, 2007

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    ooooh... this is good, little familliar though. MCR influenced by any chance? Anyway..
    Cool piece. well done
    keep it up

    hugs and luvvs
    xxxxxxxx


  • TwiztidMaggot
    July 23, 2007
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    hmm... some of this sounds really familiar... but that's all cool! lol. I like the way you wrote this! keep up your good work! I love seeing stuff like this... and stuff about love and all that... I love sadness, just not like "I want to die and cut myself... all that" keep it up!

    Crimson


  • Quotidian Detritus
    July 23, 2007

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    Awesome!!!

    I love this!
    It's really entertaining to try to figure out the different lyrics. it fits together really nicely too.
    Nice Job,
    Mish XXX, (TheHeartOfEverything)


  • ShelbieSchizo
    June 2, 2007
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    I love how you put all of the lyrics in a way that makes so much sense.I really loved it. MCR Roxx!


  • FallingTwilight
    May 27, 2007

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    This is so kool! I enjoyed reading it. =D I absolutely love MCR.

    Have a wonderful day,

    FallenPoeticAngel


  • PorSiempre
    May 21, 2007

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    Great!

    Hey Zanny! I loved it! And I knew most of the lyrics! It makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside!
    Beez


  • Venusbabi
    May 17, 2007

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    loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i am a huge afi and mcr fan and that was a great mix of their songs!!!!!!!!!!!sing the sorrow and 3 cheers 4 sweet revenge r my 2 absolute fav cds!!!!!!!!!!!! im so gonna add u 2 my favs!!!


  • BArBiE slaPPed m3
    March 24, 2007
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    I loved the perfect mixing of both the bands. I love mcr more than life! Keep it up!


  • Ale E
    March 24, 2007
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    Awsome. This is getting bookmarked....


  • McFairy
    March 24, 2007

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    I am a huge MCR fan, and I think that this was absolutely fantastic, but I see that there is none of my black parade titles in it, there are some fantastic lyrics on that album.

    ***Strangeangel***


  • halapalu
    March 24, 2007

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    i love this. I'm a huge mcr fan and i think that this is the most wonderful idea i've seen. the way you mixed it up was percect.
    maybe you should take something from mcr's new album. like from cancer or mama. possibly house of wolves? i can't think of much from black parade you could use though..

    keep up the good work!


  • Mortal
    March 24, 2007

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    I love it! I mix up between the different songs is great. Sing the Sorrow,Three cheers, Ghost of you, Girls not Grey, Bleed black. Helena, and silver and Cold, Or did i miss one?


  • princessbeccie
    March 24, 2007
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    love both bands.....and uve taken alot of my fav lines from both of their songs...but im not really sure bout this i loved the idea but the ideas seemed to jump all over i dono....but still i liked it anyways ...keep up the lovley work


  • FaeRae gold member
    March 24, 2007

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    Three Cheers for . . . A great take on a great song

    Good Job! Couldn't have picked a better band. Course, I'm probably also the only 30 year-old obssessed with MCR. The words were beautiful. Gerard would be proud.
    ***FaeRae***


  • Blue Azure
    March 23, 2007
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    interesting and intruiging write, liked it. great idea behind this. :-)

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