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With Such Passion.

I want to kiss those lips
with such passion
my feelings couldn't ever be misunderstood.

You'll know that I care for you
more than I ever could.

You're the one I think of
before I drift to sleep.

Your name is the one
I initial on my notebooks.

You've got the hands
I want to keep warm.

The boy I want
at my side, as we keep stride.

I want to kiss those lips
with such passion
that none of these things
will ever be overlooked.

I want to kiss those lips
with such a passion
nothing will blur again
and when I open my eyes
I'll see your
beautiful
smile.

Author notes

this poem doesnt feel finished to me.. so i might later rewrite it.

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