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Milky-Way symphony

With 500 blue-shirt-buttons, I could buy myself a phosphorescent cow,
introduce her to the mysteries of astronomy,
so that one day she'll fly to meet her ancestors
via Milky-Way Airlines.

Now my Mr.D claims 1000 pink pebbles in order to keep my ficus.
The divorce papers though recyclable,
alow me only four hours per month, in his no-view balcony
under an austeric supervision,
but what am I without my pourus leaf to cry on?!

Though if I had 2000 marsh-mellows,
I would hire Julian's retarded ego,
to type till bleeding my three-pages-biography
and sign then at the bottom:...X.

But as the recyclable cow and the retarded ficus,
along with Julian's phosphorescent ego
are not for sale...
I will order some mysteries, under a four hours pink supervision,
buy the bottom airline and send my Mr.X to its ancestors.

A contest entry

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  • Justin3
    January 12, 2008

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    I'm sorry to say this failed to move me in anyway, perhaps there's something I'm missing, could very well be, I fail to see what point it makes and where the sense is.Also I see nothing modern about it.Thank you anyway for your entry.


  • x Star Dust x
    July 27, 2007

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    I think the creativity level of this write is very well done.

    Thanks for entering Good luck to you.


  • Travis7
    June 15, 2007

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    this poem is so funny
    i loved it
    it's AWESOME
    your a crazy awesome poet
    thanks a lot for entering my contest
    GOOD LUCK


  • Creatress
    June 7, 2007

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    Two Thumbs Up

    What a quirky, fantastic, surprisingly intelligent piece. I so enjoyed,
    ""With 500 blue-shirt-buttons, I could buy myself a phosphorescent cow,
    introduce her to the mysteries of astronomy,
    so that one day she'll fly to meet her ancestors
    via Milky-Way Airlines.""
    This just transports you to another realm. Loved it! So much greatness! I love that your not afraid to cut loose.

    Creatress



  • PerfectImperfection
    April 22, 2007
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    Amazing nonsense here indeed! This is such a very creative use of literation, and with miraculous effect to boot! I love these lines:

    "With 500 blue-shirt-buttons, I could buy myself a phosphorescent cow,
    introduce her to the mysteries of astronomy,
    so that one day she'll fly to meet her ancestors
    via Milky-Way Airlines."

    That is just hilarious!

  • Meggh LotusMay
    April 5, 2007
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    So surreal it's unbelievable! I liked this, it's just utterly... crazy! Keep writing, Meggh xxxxxxxxxxxx


  • ZestyDreams
    March 30, 2007
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    Interesting and unique. Is it suppossed to make me crave a milky way?


  • masky
    March 28, 2007

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    My brain turns and shizzles at the sight of this Galaxy. Well, well, well!
    ...LOL!
    I am left with tears in my eyes(because of laughter, thankfully!)!
    God, first time I read it...I thought "Good, so now I am left speechless in front of a poem, because someone wrote something just harder than my capacity to understand."
    Then I saw the contest topic, and I have nothing left to say, but:
    Nonsense on!


    • MissStranger
      March 28, 2007
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      well...I first wrote it for the "TAKE MY POINTS" contest. the task was to write why do I need those points and it supposed to be humurous thanks for the comment,Vi!

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