You broke my heart
Tore it into tiny pieces of red paper
With the word LOVE written all over
But yet it doesn’t seem real
I still have my dreams
With you loving me
I feel it’s not over
My heart is the queen of denial
Thinking you are still here
That you are still mine
And by no means
Are you with someone else
I am the queen of denial
Love is blinding my heart
It is bringing on a phase
I hate to go through
I’ve went through so many times before
And I will go through it many times in the future
And each moment that passes
I will be the queen of denial
A contest entry
- 26 letters, 26 enteries Number 2 by SensualWhispers.
600 points, ended April 13, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Excellent poem!
I really liked your poem and how it flowed, but this stanza just stood out to me:
My heart is the queen of denial
Thinking you are still here
That you are still mine
And by no means
Are you with someone else
I am the queen of denial:
It was written perfectly. Excellent work. Thanks for entering the contest and the best of luck to you. Kassie -
Sadness combined with Love with the meaning of Emo poetry, a decent combination!
It's almost great see people combine diffrent genre's to the meaning of their poetry. Most decent...
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