Your eyes are sad, and crying
Its showing to me, all your fears
How that need for being held shows
to stop your eyes from crying tears
Now I'm going to ask, what can I do?
Let me pull you as close, and not let go
Please tell me, what bothers you there?
If something hurts you, I need to know
So I'm wondering, why didn't you ask me?
Do I give the impression that I care?
Please tell me, is something missing?
Give me a chance, to take away that despair!
For its possible, if you give me a chance
Take to heart, that there's something I can do
Even if its only to make you smile now
for that is the first step, its up to you
So here is your chance, to take away the pain
That is something I know, for I've been there before
Lets change, from why didn't you ask me here,
to understanding a love, that comes with much more!
David
Please tell me what you think
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A wise heart indeed it is that attempts to lend itself to another
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good story of supportive lover
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TEARS OF SADNES
Lets change, from why didn't you ask me here, to understand a love,that comes with much more! Even if it's only to make you smile
sorry but your words are tearing my heart out.
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You Should Give Lessons.............
to other men to teach them how to both talk and treat a woman!!!Seriously your tender heart shines through in all of your writings!!! Hope you keep on writing as it is such a pleasure to read at the end of a long day!!!Thanks for sharing!!~~Toni~~
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Aaaaaaaaaaw Danggggggg-
Another Precious verse You have penned my Friend
Thank You for sharing Your Heart of Gold and allowing Your Gifts to be inhaled~
Makes the world a better place
Keep that ink flowing~~
Many blessings to You!
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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this is priceless david. what i wouldn't give for an unnamed someone to say these exact words to me. but, i suppose he would have to feel this way first. thank you for sharing such beauty with me today. viyanna rosemarie
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