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Going too fast?

Sorry officer, for driving so fast,
I didn't notice you, as I was going past.
I need to be somewhere, you see,
My wife is in labour, and she needs me.

So to her, I must go,
It's not the time, to be going slow.
Need to comfort, each painful shout,
I want to be there, when the babe comes out.

I don't want my wife, to do it alone,
That's why I'm doing 50, in a 20 zone.
Understand officer, and give back my key,
I should be there, don't you agree?

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  • tawk gold member
    March 23, 2007

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    Wow I too hope that you were able to get out of the ticket! What a wonderful and funny write about life. I just loved it I am still laughing.


    • andie11
      March 23, 2007
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      thanks for the kind comments

      I have always thought it would be hard to write from a man's perpective, but this one was easy!


  • Melodies
    March 23, 2007

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    Heck... I hope he got out of the ticket!

    Because this poem sounds so convincing! Very funny and the rhyming is great! Thank you for coming to our Ticket party with your considerable talent!


  • kathy1967
    March 23, 2007

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    SPECTACULAR!!

    This is so cool!! I love it!! so real and so very
    true!! What a EXCELLENT piece of writting!!
    good luck!!