There once was a man from Lahore,
who vented his spleen with a roar,
when he saw his new bride
with her lover astride,
rutting away like a boar.
Author notes
Don't know if this is suitable, but it IS short!
A contest entry
- Short, punchy poems. by Floorboards.
390 points, ended March 23, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Hilarious - you are indeed a man of many talents and poetic styles. I will admit to enjoying reading and writing some smut myself.
Ann
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This is definately different it seems you are a man of many talents.very cleverly written Bill well done to you
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Oh my God Bill! This is to funny! I love it. You can be so funny at times with some writes!! Thanks for sharing this.
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I rather liked this- it was wrong but made me smile.
Then I worry about the bride after............
She wouldn't fare well. -
teeheehee
hahaha!!! nice one, very good indeed, perfect meter. thanks a lot for entering my contest and good luck,
floorboards. -
I can always rely on a smile from you Bill, This is great ..I do so love limericks....
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