Oh Patty, sweet Patty, my dear -
Please lend me your attentive ear.
For it's not my wish to operate as the Church -
Whining from the pulpit, as though I'm in a lurch.
For my spirit wishes to continue this dance
from sharing His message of spiritual abundance.
Yet I don't want you to experience more guilt,
from my use of soft, persuasive words of golden lilt.
But in your last contest, I was unable to place -
So this time be generous with your points with poetic grace.
Be a part of my Christian, poetry squad
and assist me to honor our beloved and faithful God.
Learn more about me and my poetry at:
http://www.squidoo.com/book-isbn-1419650513/
Author notes
Simple rhyming scheme - AA, BB, CC, ....
A contest entry
- Take My Points, Please! by pattyann4500.
3500 points, ended March 26, 2007, 36 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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i would like to congratulate you on the bronze trophy and wonderful write for this contest. viyanna rosemarie
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Thank you, Joe. I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. I wasn't sure had a sense of humor, but I'm glad you do.
I appreciate your entry and wish you luck in the contest. Hugs, Patricia
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wow...nice begging..."Oh Patty, sweet Patty, my dear -
Please lend me your attentive ear." good luck in the contest!
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Good job of pleading! Great job of keeping it rhyming and on track. Well Done!
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Hmmm this was different from what I would have thought, still well written and definetely uplifting and cute. Thank you for sharing it
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SO CUTE!!
This is so Cute I love every single line in
this EXCELLENT piece of writting.!! Thank You
and good luck!!
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