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*Cannibal* .P.a.r.a.d.e.

C.o.c.a.i.n.e-*covered* [corpses] in the harsh m♥♥nlight
Spirits b.b.breaking free from their /chains/, ready to *fight*

!Creepy!
~Crawly~
_Falling_
*Mauling*

This white skin is caked with foundation and *glitter*
These deep-blue lips sprinkled with +grunge+ and l.i.t.t.e.r.

Pretty [hair] tangled in bunches
Late-night madness, c.c.cannibal-munches

F.e.a.s.t on my soul, I will *gladly* let you in
I’m ready, ♥my dear♥ , to commit the ultimate sin...

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  • littlegirlapril
    April 23, 2007
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    Holy buh-jeezus!!
    This is really good!!!
    I love this with a passion!!

    [[ZombiNa]] ♥


  • Cyanide Angel gold member
    April 23, 2007
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    i like it...i love the dirtty pretty writing style!


  • Slowly searching
    April 22, 2007
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    hey thats sweetr i really like how you typed this!!


  • fallenangel671
    April 11, 2007
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    this is an awesome poem, i couldnt relate but i thought it was good, keep writing!!!

    ~Ashley~<3


  • Weetzie bat
    April 5, 2007
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    yummy!


  • xshotxinxthexheartx
    March 29, 2007
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    mmm..kinky


  • neon nightmares
    March 29, 2007
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    What would the ultimate sin be then?


  • neon nightmares
    March 26, 2007
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    Simply beautiful

    You really are a great poet. I envy your tallent. I really do.
    big grins
    thumbs up
    much luvvs
    xxxx


  • Dreamer With Dreams silver member
    March 25, 2007

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    Your way with words is extraordinary. I n v u. Another great write. What can I say? You're amazing!

    Safely hidden in the darkness,

    ~ the Rocker who lost all


  • BArBiE slaPPed m3
    March 24, 2007
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    You have such a wonderful way with words. I'm envious. ^.^
    always and forever,
    Annie


  • Deceits Tears silver member
    March 23, 2007
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    Another great read...your good, you say things well nice job .


  • InfiniteCaitlin
    March 23, 2007
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    ohhhh doll face, I love this!!! great job!!!

    your words are precise, & get the point through

    && have a way with rhyme, && the imagery is amazing, Love love love love it!!!!

    youre an amazing poet!!!!


  • Mildew in PinK tile
    March 23, 2007

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    This white skin is caked with foundation and *glitter*
    These deep-blue lips sprinkled with +grunge+ and l.i.t.t.e.r.

    i effin love this image.


  • Marilyn.
    March 23, 2007
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    AHY! Me gusta!!!

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