ill dye my hair and wear black clothes
cut myself and hope it shows
screw off fake smiles,just let them stare
scream and yell till they dont care
let my grades slip,hate the world
pray poeple choke on what they heard
ill paint my nails black and red
red means blood and black means dead
carve your name 1,000 times
forget to lie, and say im fine
ill cut my hair and rip my jeans
ill break their shit and steal their things
ill peirce my lip and gage my ears
disreguard everyones tears
stop taking bullshit people say
wear dark make-up everyday
forget whats right, drink the hard shit
as for my heart- get rid of it
get rid of "pretty", get rid of "nice"
now that pretty boy doesnt run my life
suicidal thoughts, should i live or should i die?
or should i forget that you taught me how to cry
so ill stop trying to be so pure
you were the only fucking cure
Author notes
Blessamobabina ♥
A contest entry
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Good write! I told you to give me your best, and you did. Awesome job!
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Never have been one into dark poetry But this one I love I do not know why, the rhyme i think is wonderful the inner message put over powerfully all in all i really did enjoy it Good luck in the contest
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Lots of emotion shown here and I like the way it rhymes too. Thanks for the entry ... if this is really going on keep writing and vent; it helps. Nobody is worth this kind of pain...believe me.
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i do this stuff. I wear black everyday, dark make-up, i cut and etc.. I liked this poem alot
I loved the rhyme and flow.
I'm sorry if you are going through rough times.
Keep your chin up
~Sara~
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emo jeny is still jeny & i still love her
& please if emo jeny decides to cut let it be not so deep pls ily
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