live your life to open up to the world.
Open up to find thing you could only dream about.
Bringing the whole world with you when you grieve will get you no where.
Kiss me good bye when you wake up to leave.
Hello world this is me. This is where I live and this is what Im like
Live up to dreams and reach beyond the stars.
A contest entry
- Short, punchy poems. by Floorboards.
390 points, ended March 23, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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very good
this is very good, very hopeful and inspiring, i like it, thanks a lot for entering my contest and good luck,
floorboards.
p.s, i think you need to add an "s" on the end of "thing" in line two,
cheers
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