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Don't tell

A smooth little *puncture,*
An almost instant high.
My body starts *vibrating,*
My head is in the sky.

The room *spins* slowly,
Accelerating into a twirl.
A daze,
Aren't I a silly girl?

I hit [the ground] with a -bang-
This is the worst low I've ever had.
Don't tell mummy about the ~heroin~,
[Surely] she'll  be mad

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  • HollyxHavok
    October 19, 2007

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    Wow.
    See, this is one of those short-but-sweet things that prove that great things come in small packages.
    I am impressed.


  • acidnwonderland
    March 23, 2007
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    Eh, this seemed to childish and not serious enough for me.