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The Miracle

Each day is a miracle
Beyond the eyes can see
Horizons bring

 precious melodies
Soft spoken memories, shared
Laughter,

Being the treasure we seek
Hardships creating the Will to be
The vase glows on the outside
While the rose inside blooms
More seeds planted
Some die in the process  
Others blossom and flourish
Prosper never surrender
Radiance aglow

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  • Lady-Pegasus
    May 14, 2007

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    Oh yes, definitely one to consider, thank you my friend! I am bookmarking this and am glad that you sent it to me, now of course, I AM a bit partial on a few fronts, but they are not hindering my judgement lmao like the fact that Vic;s last name, and eventually mine, is Miracle! Aside fro all thatthis is indeed wonderful and I love it! Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors. Hetohke'e *


  • Fairy Nutty Buddy silver member
    April 1, 2007
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    Lovely poem, inspirational and soothing. I enjoyed reading this a lot, Kari. MommaNut


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    March 31, 2007

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    Beautiful

    This is such a very beautifully penned poerm and the flow was extra oprdinary. I loved the start and all through out the poem to the spectactular finish. Excellent poem all round and keep up the great work here. signed, Paul


  • Sacrificial Love
    March 31, 2007

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    The vase glows on the outside
    While the rose inside blooms


    How very beautiful you have penned this...
    You are an amazing poetess dear sister... I don't get by your page often enough ... but when I do... I am always in awe.

    xoxo
    heidi


  • freespirit51
    March 25, 2007

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    More beautiful words were never spoken my dear friend. I really enjoyed this iece as it expresses many of my own thoughts. Great work. Love the background as well.


  • NoWayJo
    March 24, 2007

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    I really like the sentiment of this poem, Kari...It's to stay strong and focus on the good things and not to look back in surrender to things that have hurt us.

    These border-backgrounds by Maatkara are just exquisite, especially to the poetry you write--You're doing her very proud and the combination of your art to hers is simply lovely.

    Jo


  • suseann
    March 24, 2007
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    Inspired piece. The older I get,the more I must agree. Lovely back and sidebar too.


  • MysticAngelEyes
    March 24, 2007
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    Such a nice piece you've wroten here, such a meanign goes with this well done.


  • NeverSayAddiction
    March 23, 2007

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    i like it

    you did a good job on this poem,it seems to be very intent but also very subtle...i like it a lot...


  • naked roots
    March 23, 2007

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    For some reason, this reminded me of life cycles. I do agree, each day is a miracle. It is what we make of it, and I try to cherish each one. Lovely work!


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    March 23, 2007

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    every day is a miracle if it goes right i agree. but if it goes wrong what does tht make it?? it was a lovely poem with a meaning to it and i liked it well dne hun


  • layla.
    March 23, 2007

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    I hope all the devilness indside us would agree to this, then we could all go to Heaven
    ~bad resln


  • catz Moderators member
    March 23, 2007

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    Yes, Kari, each day is a miracle, there's no getting around it And each day we plant the seeds for tomorrow and collect the harvest of yesterdays planting.

    A nice peaceful poem, my dear, very sensetive to lifes everchanging sameness.

    Very good write, Kari

    love and
    Granna


  • GuardianPhoenix7289
    March 23, 2007

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    So nice....

    I love it... for some reason it brings me just an ounce closer to some nice peace this very stressful morning.. I have been up all night, and afternoon yesterday (now 6:20am) and I am stressed... very. The most stressed in awhile... and for some reason... this just brings a bit of peace to my mind.. thanks! Great great GREAT write!!!


  • leander Moderators member
    March 23, 2007

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    horizons bring precious melodies

    Every once in a while I hear those precious melodies sung by the horizon... Unfortunately most of the time it's just the humming of the cars I hear

    This is a very beautiful poem that you've written sweety, radiating a nice and gentle feeling through it well done!

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