My room is filled with broken silence.
The aftermath of your vigorous violence.
Hatred and fear cripples my beaten soul.
I know that this was your true goal.
To see that I was broken and heartless,
Kneeling forlornly on the floor loveless.
Do you enjoy the pain you caused on me?
Do the looks on my face set you free?
Shame is forever on my mind as you sneer,
At the lack of emotion in me, this lack of fear.
Without reguarding that it was you who worked so hard,
To make me like this, this shell of a shattered shard.
Gathering myself, or at least what is left of me,
I know that even with my broken pieces I will be
Stronger and better than you could ever hope to.
I will always stand once again to face you.
Author notes
hey ~ at the end of the day, You can always find another way, to stand up and fight, isn't that right?
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Beautiful strength from a beautiful soul! God my dear amo, I know not weither to smile or cry. Your inspire within me a deep love for you in this right and a deep hatred for someone else.
You convey it all as if first hand and to be honest I am dearly hoping it is not so the case. I would not wish such a cruel test of will upon anyone.
You convey so well the emotion here but most of all, Dear god the strength! A wonderful write my dear amo. I am proud of you!
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WOW..what runs through my mind right now....RAPE.the emotion captured is captivating.i was practically drolling.i agree this is gold.idk...platinum maybe.lol.but i was wondering if you leftout be at the end of line fifteen.it just kinda sounded akward the way it is.well good job and keep it flowing.cherrio.
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Loved it. Very traumatizing and it has such great flow and rhymes. Wonderful.
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Wow!!!!!! Me liketh!!!
Cassie
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i like this, you have a strong point in this, really keep it flowing this is gold, that is all i have to say
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A dark poem i like. we will always be able to stand and fight as long as we have jesus. please return the favor
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