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Caveman



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  • Mari Goes
    July 24, 2008

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    Was a very funny story!!! Left my comment at SW. Thanks for the good laugh


    • wattle silver member
      July 31, 2008

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      Mari, your smile is enough to keep me trying.


  • parenchma
    July 9, 2007
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    Oh, absolutely! I was quite hesitant to read this... very unerved; horribly confused, then elated!


  • DecemberSun
    March 29, 2007

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    Wattle,

    Holy crap! That took me completely by surprise! Your story gives me a sense of displacement
    and has me thinking about perspective. You did a fantastic job with this one, I am still
    in shock!

    Sarah

    • wattle silver member
      March 29, 2007
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      Thank you Sarah you are very kind (to this poor old scribbling fool).


  • queen gold member
    March 23, 2007

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    I didn't know you had a twisted dark side to you Very good story with a good twist.


    • wattle silver member
      March 24, 2007
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      Thank you Aunty Queen. I always act like an angel when Aunty Queen visits. I get more cake.

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