I have found nothing,
And the memories are dead.
Memories of such love...
But that love cut and I bled.
Yes, it seemed pretty to the eye,
Sparkled in the deepest night...
But once I became close to it,
And was clouded by the sight.
That's when the trouble started,
That's when my heart shattered,
Into a million pieces,
...And nothing else matter...
No, nothing at all.
Soon I was consumed in pain,
Lost and so lonely,
Swallowed in torrents of rain,
No more joy and no more bliss,
Oh, blinded was I in the face of love,
I despised that poisoned kiss!
Such a sin never came from above...
Please tell me what you think
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That's a pretty good poem, I like the emotion it portrays


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Thank you.
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Thank you, though sad this was not personal, I was just in a foul moon.
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This is one Powerful verse You have penned my Friend and painful to inhale~
Only wish Happiness Your way
I commend You for the Strength to pen this for I imagine there are many who could relate...
Thank You for sharing this~ even though sad to
read...for it tugs at the Heart~
but Beautifully written with much emotion~
Many blessings to You!
Best wishes always
and much love~ Desire~*~




