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Blinded

I have found nothing,
And the memories are dead.
Memories of such love...
But that love cut and I bled.

Yes, it seemed pretty to the eye,
Sparkled in the deepest night...
But once I became close to it,
And was clouded by the sight.

That's when the trouble started,
That's when my heart shattered,
Into a million pieces,
...And nothing else matter...

No, nothing at all.
Soon I was consumed in pain,
Lost and so lonely,
Swallowed in torrents of rain,

No more joy and no more bliss,
Oh, blinded was I in the face of love,
I despised that poisoned kiss!
Such a sin never came from above...

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  • Preston Crigger
    March 30, 2007
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    That's a pretty good poem, I like the emotion it portrays

  • Ghost of a Siren
    March 27, 2007
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    Thank you, though sad this was not personal, I was just in a foul moon.


  • Desire gold member
    March 23, 2007

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    Oy-


    This is one Powerful verse You have penned my Friend and painful to inhale~
    Only wish Happiness Your way
    I commend You for the Strength to pen this for I imagine there are many who could relate...
    Thank You for sharing this~ even though sad to
    read...for it tugs at the Heart~
    but Beautifully written with much emotion~

    Many blessings to You!
    Best wishes always
    and much love~ Desire~*~