there's a right time for truth,
she said
after yet another lie.
I asked myself:
every moment,
isn't truth the right thing to say?
the story of my love
is that simple -
I waited for truth,
while she waited for the 'right' time
and neither of them
ever came...
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It's wonderful Sau, the poem, the meaning and how it seems to refect on some things in my life that I need to work on.
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As I told you before, this is one of the poems I have inside of me, but you brought it into words. Right time for the truth is always the 'now' time, everything else ends in falseness and lies.
Excellent poem, can't tell you how much I like it!
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Awww.... Yar Sau, seriously I wonder too when in such a stage.. what if nothing matters and we've been fumbling and loosing out on things? Its scary but I guess worth pondering over.. Lots of Love Sorry have been away for some time.. hope you are doing fantabulously good
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brilliant! this is one of those moments in life that stays with us forever!
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Well said Sau... sometimes I guess things are known, and we expect too much mettle of people to reveal them with words, especially the spoken word. A fantastic write in all aspects.
s and best wishes always... ~Genie~
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You have written a poem with a lot of truth in it!In my opinion there is no "right time", every time should be the right time to say the truth. Well done!
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I agree with MargaretG ...
You have said a very personal thing with intensity but briefly...
Well done!
~bad resln
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excellent
Time gives perspective, we finally can see the whole picture. This is short and simple, but full of depth and astute analysis. Blessings to you, always.
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