Lines on ones face
Wisdom gained
Smoothness gone
Days pass by fast
Lasting long once
Moments pass by
Days are not timed
Age has given this gift
No words need said
All is understood
Same question still
Not answered
Thoughts become deep
Life is so precious
Then heaven lets us in
Author notes
Pruedence
A contest entry
- Age by flight.
900 points, ended April 1, 2007, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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COOL
Wow blow my mind. This is really cool. Thanks for the read. The last line is totally awesome " Then heaven lets us in."
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The flow of this could us a little tweaking,
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Most Excellent
the gift of time is one of the greatest gifts from God himself. Time for us to do his will while we are here on earth.
Yvonne
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