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Holding back.

If I never let myself succeed.
Then I can never fail.
If I never fail again,
I will never have to feel that pain.

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  • poetrychick
    April 8, 2007
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    Hmm. Short. It made me think, though. :]

  • UnityHope
    April 1, 2007

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    aww.. u shouldnt give up hope of finding a better path
    u can succeed at anything you do!
    How the new job goin anyway?
    i loved this
    well done darlin
    luv dani

  • sweetpea0611
    March 26, 2007
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    americanrebel

    Hey Will please read my latest poem. Thanks.

    Amy


  • ScarletLetter
    March 25, 2007
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    truth

    lies in silence


  • saseychik0688
    March 23, 2007
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    i agree with the other 3 peoples comments, if you dont try you'll never be able to succeed.

  • layla.
    March 23, 2007
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    trying isn't bad

    ~bad resln

  • blueyez
    March 23, 2007
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    But if you didn't even try would you ever find happiness?


  • Love-Lee
    March 23, 2007

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    But if you never let yourself succeed will you ever feel that pleasure? Sorry personal notes to you not good anyways...
    I like it but I still don't think it fits for who we are talking about he wants to he just isn't willing to try...
    I like it. So much feeling emotion pain... I just don't think it pertains to him...
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