There is but
One I
Adore.
A contest entry
- Another Hay[na]ku (my 50th contest on AP) by cherche -d -ame.
1050 points, ended March 24, 2007, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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couldn't have said that more perfectly now, could ya? How lucky a girl can be if she knows a man feels that way and is willing to speak that to the world - or as Bukowski would say it's a "confession" of sorts.
Liking a lot that you're writing again - as if you were on a sabatical or something.
- Kimmie
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Is it you?
lol (kidding.)
Seriously though, someone keeps plaguing me with this form in my contests and I don't know a thing about it. Maybe you could come back to AP sometime and enlighten me.
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You guessed it. It's me. I guess it's easy to adore one's self...
Nah. Not really. But thanks for making me laugh.
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Certainly straight to the point Rich. It'll put a smile on the recipients face without a doubt. Brief, but powerful in context and delivery. If only we all took the time to express sincere sentiments like this without constraint. The whole experience of emotional attachment might not appear quite as complex as we sometimes perceive.
Sonia X -
Such a simple sentiment, expressed honestly and succinctly. Good luck with the contest Rich.
Helen -
thank you for entering this contest and best wishes. How lucky is the one to whom this refers to- to be the one that someone feels this about
reenie
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