I guess its not time yet
I'll keep my emotions on hold
And pray for the best
I don't want to leave
My new home, friends, and life
I don't want to be sent away
Back to that place
Back to that hell..
Where my nightmares all began.
I want to blame him
For everything he's done
Because with him is where it begun
Maybe if they hadn't separated
Just maybe if they were still together
The she'd still be alive.
I miss her already
Its a tape that plays over and over again in my mind
On constant repeat
Seeing her motionless
Speechless
Cold.
That what makes everything so real
Knowing that she no longer can feel
Just touching her pale skin
And knowing she'll never breathe again
I just want to go back in time
And tell her how much I love her
How much I need her
And how I wish she didn't have to
go.
Author notes
Wrote on 3/8/07- The day after my mom passed.
A contest entry
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600 points, ended April 1, 2007, 13 entries
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love it
I love this poem so much.. i feel like that right now! Keep it up lex!
Alexis~
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This is sad.
You know I can visualize a woman in my mind that could not escape her husband. So you have come in with a highly emotional piece that is written well. -
I'm assuming this is Lexi... but there is no name in the author's comments. If you could fix that... I'd appreciate it. But now to the poem! This was amazing and truly tear breaking. I want you to know that you are in my thoughts... that wont change! Hope you are doing okay, where ever you are living, and that you have many people backing you up! Great write!
Rock on! xoxo Meg
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Yes it's my poem. Sorry I've been really slow as of lately lol.
ly
<3Lex
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