I wake everyday sun gleaming
hungry i search for food
people look as i pillfier
in disray or disgust
i dont know
just wish i had a home
with someone thereso i want be alone
i smell of fish just like cologne
can't get a job cause im dirty as hell
never know when i will wake up in jail
it's like a hotel to me food,water
i cry when i get out when normal people scream and shout
im homless can you imagine hell on earth
god whats the matter
will i live long
will i live strong
will i survive if yes for how long
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nice and meaningfull portrayal of life's disgrace. It's sad how everybody else could care less, and your dumb ass actually has enough sympathy to care and enough empathy to share. I dig it
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