as i sat in your lap
it made me think about him
about his laugh
his smile
and it made me feel bad
because i was in love with you
not him...
the glares in your eye
made me smile inside
i love you
reminding myself
that i have moved on
but i know in my heart
that i still love him
a tear runs down my cheek
i lie my head against your chest
wishing all this wasn’t so difficult
wondering why we had to move on
i still love you
i tell myself
but love him too
your sweet.. gentle kiss
makes me feel all warm inside
i want to love you
i do love you
but...
i love him too
Author notes
cherry-blossom808
hey.. i hope you like it....
A contest entry
- For Oboebaybee's faves only! by in-the-twilight.
600 points, ended April 1, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything Contest by PrettyxoxPoison.
300 points, ended April 10, 2007, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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aww that was beautiful. "i want to love you i do love you but... i love him too" my favorite part of your poem. amazing job
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Ah decisions.
This sounds like a situation on a soap opera that I watch and yes these can be a dilemna. But at least it is not boring. Nice write. -
Aw this was so sad. If this was personal, then I hope you can find a resolution. If not, good poem anyway. Great way of expressing these thoughts. Good luck in the contest.
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Harsh. This is very sad. I could feel a lump of pain climb into my throat and for a second there I was afraid I might choke on it. I hate to say it, but I am in that situation now... and well... you described exactly how it was just a few nights ago. Wow, you did great. I could feel it, all the emotion, the pain...
Maybe I felt it because I am going through the same thing right now, or maybe I felt it because you are truely good at bringing out the emotion in your words. Nicely done!
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ooooooo... this is really good and I like it a lot hun! Amazing poem with so much emotion... thanks for entering! Rock on! oxox Meg
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