Inside my heart is hurting
nside my brain is cursing
of this life I live unfufilled
of this life I have spilled
my hopes were crushed and bled
my emotions have ripped apart what was left inside my head
my knees long ago gave out underneath me
my eyes blinded from the games I see
no where is left untouched from the tears shed
and now that I am just about half dead
there is nowhere else for me to go
for in my heart I know
I will always have only me
and thats how it will always be
I'm tired of being scared
of being pushed until I am dared
of never actually knowing
where I might be going
for soon I will be dying
and these eyes will never cease from crying
and I'll be left with no one
and to always feel...
undone
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this means a lot to me. right now my life is falling apart and im trying to be happy but its just not working...i cant stand living. no matter how i try to make the best of it, it never works...i dont know what will happen an i dont know what to do anymore...so this is the best way to make me feel somewhat better. thanks.
Please tell me what you think
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WOW
This is very emotional and deep..... i find poetry is how i stay sane... its how i let out my negative emotions... GREAT WRITE....
PS R U still looking 4 a AP family... Can i join?
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Hey,
yes i totally agree with you. without it i would be like nothing. okay maybe not nothing but i would definitely be a total jackmonkey lol. sorry i know im replying to this very late too.
thank you so much.
and as one might see...
i lost all my family members lol.
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you are not alone in your feelings i again praise you for sharing your thoughts it is always nice to know you are not alone on how one can feel and i agree writing does help
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Thank you
thanks for taking the time for reading this. it means a lot. yeah writing definitely helps
. i know im not alone i just wish everyone knew how to cope with it.
thanks again.
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hey
lol i think that says it all. thank you for readinf and for your comment. means much nevertheless. ^^ ♥
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I feel for you, I've felt this shattered emptiness in my own life and I don't want to be pushy or offend, but the only cure I've found is Jesus Christ. I dearly hope that things will get better. Caring for you,
-deep one
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your not being pushy or offended. lately i have been starting to look above. i am still a bit uncertain but im trying. yeah no one ever wants to feel these feeling but we are just human. i hope it gets better for you also. never give up. thanks for your comment. means much. ♥
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Good
Hey there another great write girl you just keep comin up with gret stuff!!!!!
I like the way that it flows through the whole poem keep up the great work...............
Adam24
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hi
awe thanks adam ^^ means a lot. im glad you like it. lol i only write what i feel or think. im glad you like this. thank you. ♥
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Absolutely amazing. This was so beautiful. I just can't get over it. I loved the rhyming, the form, the message. Thsi was so good. And i totally get how ya feel.
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hey
awe thanks your comment means a lot to me. thank you. ♥
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I`m here for you no matter what happens.....Whats wrong?? You can tell me.....and this captured the emotions i had when Jeremy left me,perfectly... I hope you are ok...I love you,Joey Lynn!
-Megz
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hey,
yeah this isnt like a love thing. its like life in general. its hard to explain. an sorry i havent commented back on myspace yet. thanks means alot meagan. i hope you feel better though with jeremy. he was an asshole. i love you too. thanks. ^^ ♥
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deep this is rilly deep a fantastic peace of work and a true peace of art great job would love to read more
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hi,
awe thank you. ^^ that makes me smile. im glad you like this. thanks. ♥
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Intense
This is very sad. You have poured out your heart with your fine words and rhyme.
I pray that you will be refreshed and renewed and feel like there is a reason to continue. Sometimes we have to go through these dark times to be able to fulfill our purpose later in life.
Blessings to you - a friend from the fizzyPOP group.
- joanne
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hey,
thanks. i agree with you a hundred percent. your comment means much. ^^. thank you. ♥
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i think an expression of pain is a great way to release it,but i know for a fact taht what you are going through will not last long, there is a saying that when there is night remember that there will always be day. this is a amazing poem. and i show the sorrow and hurt. in the end though, you will see you dawn after the dusk. keep it flowing
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hey
i hope your right. if it lasts any longer i will have completely white hair lol. thanks so much for your comment. means a lot. ♥
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