moments like these
are never kept safely inside
but instead are easily forgotten
for they were nothing but actual
castastrpohies
Actually
they were miracles
Author notes
ehhh
wont really make sense to anyone but myself
Please tell me what you think
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Deep is the soulful mind
Moments are treasure buried deep in your mind, they only surface when times are difficult and there is much dread.
Very meaningfull to the undead.
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I really like the idea of this a lot, and it's applicable to many people I'm sure.
in the part "but instead," I think you should change it to "instead they're" or "they are easily forgotten" or something
because but and instead mean the same thing .. not sure, just see what you think
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oOoOOo
no actualy this makes perfect sense. or maybe i have a differant view. it seems like you know we dont realize how precious some moments are and we cling to them but they often fade for the bitterness that surrounds us after we know it wont ever happen again. well thats what i got out of it lol im sure its hella differant then what you were meaning but eh
anyway i loved this. its short [my all time favorite! >.<] & defintly deep & meaningful! beautiful work my dear, jsut beautiful.
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