When my heart is bent
And about to break
You take it gently
And hammer it straight
When I have no hope
No happiness left
You lift me higher
And amaze me so
When I am alone
Broken and friendless
You hold me tightly
And help me believe
You save me from me
I know that you're there
All your care and love
Is worth the whole world
If you leave me here
I shall not survive
My whole heart is yours
Always and all ways.
A contest entry
- Remind Me of the One I Love by Dlvvanzor.
1200 points, ended October 16, 2007, 20 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Always and all ways. Perfect. You really love this person.
Thanks for entering!
-Dlvvanzor -
Oh that is really cute. Don't you love always having someone who's there? This totally captures that bond. Great job!
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strong and just wonderful word that have flowed from this poem i like it, heart and soul captured through verse, keep it flowing
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