Muted hues of sunset skies color the view
A picture so perfect of me and you
Beneath you I lay looking into loves constellations
In each others arms the world stands at bay
Held apart from lifes tumultuous activity by your caress
A kiss so gentle like that of a rose petal on a pond
Electric Charges flow on each heart like ripples on the water
Moved by winds from afar with nature's blessings
We float in raptured gossamer clouds
Heavens light just out of reach
Bathe us in soft brilliance of souls true colors
Reds blues greens yellows similar to that of a stained glass portrait
Reveal loves truth to questing sight
And this will be out eternal night
Author notes
an extemporaneous duet
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Enraptured By The Vocabulary You've Used
This is an amazing poem. I'm having a love affair with the sunset, lol, so this poem really paints a vivid picture in my mind. You add the romance, and it's the best poem combination. Beautiful write.
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you painted something that i want with this poem i love it, it is wonderfully beautiful keep it flowing
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GORGEOUS
absolutely beautiful. It paints an amazing picture of the perfect love. THis poem makes me want that type of thing in my life. It has great imagery!
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