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Long Dark Hair

I wake up with you in my arms
I smell your long dark hair
Your face is pale in the moonlight
As I wake you with kisses

You roll over and look at me
Your smile lightens my heart
I can stare into your eyes forever
Those deep pools of reflecting love

I start forward to kiss you
as an alarm rings out
I wake up in my lonely bed
and realize what it was

I've lost everything I used to have
My dreams are never going to come true
This scandalous life will never end
I see this every time I wake up alone

I'll never hold her in my arms again
I'll never get to tell her how I feel
She leaves me every morning
As suddenly as the drunk driver took her away

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  • GarbageCan
    March 22, 2007

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    oh wow! not what I expected at all, beautiful and sad, who ever your inspiration is...it is...amazing...I'm sorry that oyu have to go through this, I know this feeling all to well. A beautiful peice, with a lot of emotion put into it, just...beautiful thank you so much for entering and i wish you the best of luck!