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His Questions

Why do you do this to me?
Tempt me with your scent
You want to be like me;
The thought makes me wince.

 

I love you too much

To damn you like I am

True, parts of me wants to

But my ancient heard says no, I am sorry, my lamb

 

You won't take no

You really want to do this;

To not have children of your own?

To end your human life with just one kiss?

 

To stop the red in your cheeks?

To stop the blood that drives me wild?

To never feel warmth again?

Or feel the warmth of your child?

 

Aren't you worried about your family?

Aren't you worried our love will fade?

Like the sun, stars, and the clouds:

That fade with each passing day?

 

I will do this on one condition

On, only one, you will have to agree

I will only turn you when you answer this:

Please, please, will you marry me?

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Based on Twilight by Stephenie Meyer

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  • ladyhelenaofsorrows
    October 17, 2008
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    i lovitloveitloveit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    especially the end, i<3 twilight woohoo yes i'm crazy but yay!!!!!!!


  • Sedated Affection
    April 19, 2008

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    OOH! I LOVE IT! I am a fellow Twilight Saga addict (lol) and you've just quenched my need for more Bella, Edward and Jacob until 'Breaking Dawn' comes out in Aug. and Twilight the movie comes out in Dec. Ooh! I can't wait!


  • Leech Lover
    March 28, 2008

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    this is very well written i really love how its in edward's point of veiw and all. plus its from my FAVORITE book series!!!!

  • kittykattyalex
    February 23, 2008

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    It was good, a couple spelling errors, but other than that great form and it totally represents our lovely Edward. Great work!


  • shadow of the void
    November 9, 2007

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    nice, is shows that not all vampires are monsters. and that some can still find room in their black, undead, could little haerts to love.

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