You think
you know everything
You think
your better than me
you think
your smarter than me
but yet your 15 and have a kid
and what about those needle marks
in your arm
your baby girls only 1
yet your shooting yourself up
to get a high
your fucking stupid
dont you think you should take better
care of yourself
for your babys sake
I mean come on
I cant believe your this fucking stupid
you have a kid
you need mental help
because your so freakin messed up
so now do you think you know everything
well guess what you little whore
you dont know shit
you are so fucking stupid
all of that just for a high
that kid needs to be taken away
from you
and put with a mother who will love herself
and the baby
so you think
you think
you think
or maybe you dont ever think
A contest entry
- Rants!!!!!!! by Nereida Nightshade.
410 points, ended May 19, 2007, 15 entries
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550 points, ended June 20, 2007, 22 entries
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Comments
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I like the ending of this, do they actually think, that IS the question.
I know how you mean and yeah sometimes we want to just shout at them as they are being stupid. But to them, sometimes it is something that has happened to them that turned them this way in the first place. Basically I try not to judge til I know all the reasons behind something.
My friends best friend is 14, nearly 15 and she's pregnant. Now her friend Tash is normally sensible but she and her boyfriend... Well, it only has to happen once doesn't it?
I also had a scare this weekend...
maybe still ahve a scare...
I'm 17 but still, you know, it's difficult sometimes as these things happen. -
I am speechless, except for the really sad thing I know way to many mothers like that. Its a frustrating thing. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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wait who's this about?
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a girl named shelby from my school.
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