My master's music
such a beautiful sound
floats thru the air
just real enough to pounce
as I follow the source
I do declare
my master was sitting there
He was singing along to some old song
So I pounced on up and felt like I belonged
I fell to sleep just languidly
I chase the notes in my dreams round and round
while my master leaves without a sound.
Author notes
I tried to make most of it rhyme, but I think the sentence with the languid line, needs to have something to rhyme with it and fit. Please feel free to share any thoughts on what to write. Thank you.
A contest entry
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700 points, ended March 26, 2007, 16 entries
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Comments
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BEAUTIFUL!!
Wonderfully done sweet heart I am proud of you it was short but so sweet. You indeed did bring a kitten to life in your words, it was seductively sweet. Your writing keep getting better and better well done and i hope to read more from you in this kind of mood.
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I really liked it! It shows style and You brought the kitten to life. It is a easy read and very nice to follow where you would like us to go.Thank you so much for shareing this beautiful piece and for entering so all could read~~~~~
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very nice. even though the word pounced was only used twice, given how short it was, still felt a little bit much, but still was very nice. i haven't looked at the picture, but sounds like you're talking about a cat and their owner. was very nice. i like it. *smiles*
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