No words are spoken
In remembrances of self
poetry isn't easily written
and critiques are given.
Images are simply conveyed
as phrases are caught
Upon pages miles long
and light flickers life
Author notes
Parallelismus Membrorum is of traditional Hebrew origin. It has lines of parallel construction and presents antitheses and complementary extensions. The lines are usually short and contain three of four words
In a list
A contest entry
- Short Lived Short Form #6 by Samplette.
425 points, ended March 22, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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simply put this is amazing, i like it, the words kind of jump out and speak to me, it is clever, keep it flowing and congrads on the contest
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Now this is a new form to me. Never heard of it before. Should critique be plurual? Nonetheless, a nice write. Thank you for entering the contest.
Sam
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thank you for pointing out that little error for me
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