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Moon's song

one Last time, in the very last rhyme.
One more step up before we are all in line.
It's okay, even though everythings wrong,
we just lay back, whisteling the Moon's song it goes -

[Chorous]
La-la na na na-na na.
Na-na la la-la la take it up, now
la-la na na na-na na.
Na-na la la-la la take it down, now.

Setting back, thoughts not any quicker
and by God, I think I'm gettin thicker.
But I'm all right because when it comes to the end,
it's the same old song that we keep singing again and it goes -

[Chorous]
La-la na na na-na na.
Na-na la la-la la take it up, now
la-la na na na-na na.
Na-na la la-la la take it down, now.

Old Moon's song, up, down, bring it back now.

[Chorous]
La-la na na na-na na.
Na-na la la-la la take it up, now
la-la na na na-na na.
Na-na la la-la la take it down, now.

[Chorous]
La-la na na na-na na.
Na-na la la-la la take it up, now
la-la na na na-na na.
Na-na la la-la la take it down, now.

[Chorous]
La-la na na na-na na.
Na-na la la-la la take it up, now
la-la na na na-na na.
Na-na la la-la la take it down, now.

one Last time, in the very last rhyme.
One more step up before we are all in line.
It's okay, even though everythings wrong,
we just lay back, whisteling the Moon's song it goes -
~On~

Author notes

Bryan-CarnelianHope totally did this like fur shur
What I did was I took a bunch of reall boring songs from when I grew up and smashed them together, removed the words, kept the beat, and stuck them in as they fit.
And they fit!
YAY ME. I mean... good luck to everyone in the contest Send me the link to the Gold Silver and Bronze peoples work please and tankyousa

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  • Kleyda14
    April 14, 2007
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    I can hear this as like a happy lil song good job I liked it.


  • March 25, 2007
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    wow bryan this is cute and tonic you should make another one like this...


  • And Hyetal
    March 24, 2007

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    Wow, beautiful! But, um, did you enter a first time before? I think it might've deleted your other entry...

    Cassie