gold
sparkle
wings flit here
and there yet flight
isn’t in the cards just
yet, restless leg bobbing
up and down no rhythm found
not swinging to a metered beat touch
with shimmer flicker what a sight spin
around in thought time to take the hurdle
Author notes
Ethree
In a list
A contest entry
- Short Lived Short Form #6 by Samplette.
425 points, ended March 22, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Beautiful-
Beautiful piece You have penned my Friend and Congratulations on Your trophy win
Love the form You presented too
One of my Favorites
Many blessings to You!
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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I liked this
A delightful etheree. Very very nice. A wonderful enry for this contest. Best of luck. I enjoyed this piece so much. ~Pam
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This is a fun little write. I have always enjoyed the Ethree form, and this is no exception. Very nicely done. Thank you for entering the contest.
Sam
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