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Caught ^up^/in/ this C.r.a.z.y W♥rld


Sweet, tender wishes
Glitter-laced kisses
[♥]
X-X-ecstasy
Re-re-release me

Crazy kids, shooting c-r-a-c-k
Lazy G.o.d, religious-smack
Do it discretely
Don’t *deceive* me

F@iryland Boys and Her0in Girls
The world’s made up of t.w.i.s.t.s ~and~ s.w.i.r.l.s
Meet me at that lonely bus-stop
I have some acid we can drop!

A contest entry

kinda lame, but oh well....

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  • fallenangel671
    April 11, 2007
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    i loved it, its a very good poem, keep writing!!

    ~Ashley~<3


  • RazorbladeKissCasel
    March 28, 2007
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    O.o

    I luverz it!!!...very good....


  • BArBiE slaPPed m3
    March 24, 2007
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    Wow. You're a dirty pretty king! *bows down*


  • NicotineHeartbreak
    March 23, 2007

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    This is an amazing entry, so thank you, but I asked for the option numbers in the authors box, so could you please give them to me.

    x x


  • Mildew in PinK tile
    March 22, 2007
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    whoa some amazing lines here hunny.star

    Crazy kids, shooting c-r-a-c-k
    Lazy G.o.d, religious-smack
    Do it discretely
    Don’t *deceive* me

    it really fascinates me that your into dirty pretty so im definatly gonna keep an eye on you
    keep up the gorgeous lines

    [♥]


  • Deceits Tears silver member
    March 22, 2007
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    Nice write good job .

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