Black is what we'd say
is not a color,
but a shade.
For the fools who call it color,
I feel tonight,
I'll kill another.
Because if I hear,
another fool who compares
black to red,
or blue to black,
I'll tear their spine out
upon a rack.
A contest entry
- Why do you love the color Black? by Lj-.
350 points, ended March 24, 2007, 12 entries
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Horrendous!!
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A little overkill but well written.
John -
I like this. I'm not quite sure what it is that I like about it, but I do.
Nice write.
Thank you for entering,
Best of luck!
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Gray's Anatomy
Well bite me and put me in a shredder if it isn't true that red is to black as spines are to fools.
Wrap this write up in what we'd say is not a good poem and if I read another I'll tear my shade-of-black roots out.
-df-
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