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Dangerous Thoughts

You think you know me
But the truth lies within
A jaded past haunts me
With too much time for thought
I'm my own worst enemy
My thoughts an array of disease
Eating me from the inside
Perfecting the downward spiral,

Hatred seething from every pore,
Shattering dreams,
Destroying hope,
Breaking my destined path,
Floating through wasted time, with
Whispers, unheard
Hearts, broken
Love, unfelt
Anger, rage, and pain flowing
Sabotaging my very existence
With my self-destructive power
This is the essence of who I am
Filled with only dangerous thoughts

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  • SensualWhispers
    April 9, 2007

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    very nice

    this is extremely dark and almost tainted by a hidden afterthought of what your past actually does hold. You've done a great job with the title, congrads, you've made the finalist list. Thanks for entering and the best of luck to you. kassie


  • Deceits Tears silver member
    March 22, 2007

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    This was great, another good one from you, all the best in your contest .


  • slipperssun gold member
    March 22, 2007

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    lol this is so damn dark ... i can se why you wanted this title...lol i wish you luck in the contest
    cheers
    jen


  • JustSimplyLissa gold member
    March 22, 2007

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    I really like this, it's climatic in a sense. It is simply put forth and is beautifully written. Good job!


    • Welcome-To-Hell
      March 22, 2007
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      Why thank you its different then what I normally write since its a bit longer and has no form whatsoever

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