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Ma Belle

Belle
Lovely girl
Save my heart

Or, when you
Abandon, I
Die

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  • cherche -d -ame
    March 22, 2007

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    thank you for entering.Haynaku as I understand is a fairly new/modern poetry form and somehow you were able to sort of lend it a voice of "old"I wish you the best of luck,
    reenie