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Fire & Desire

The Passion burns so deep within
So close in my heart
We'll be considered twins
I'll be there for you
With you
On you
Thru thick and thin
Delicately passing by
A soft breeze
Like Spring wind
I'm not perfect
But my love for you will be
Honoring my man
Being true to only thee
I'll wait for you
With a single rose
When you walk thru the door of my heart
Watching me while I pose
A meal of Passion
A side of Love
For dessert you'll have
Me all night to love
Ephiphany

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  • Luna Tique Fringe
    March 31, 2007
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    system wouldn't let give any more clappies...already gave some...I guess there's a limit..Clap, clap,clap..and a sisterly kiss on the cheek..

  • Luna Tique Fringe
    March 31, 2007
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    hey...congratualtions...he picked the right girl!!
    so I guess we kind sorta related, lol..But you are the REAL thing..when ever you come into the room..I fade away..cos he is ALL yours..lol


    • Ephiphany
      April 1, 2007
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      Thank You

      I really appreciate your comment, and thanks for the kiss on the check my sister


  • BlackRabbit9x
    March 31, 2007

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    Unbelievable

    This was an incredibly passionate write, full of imagination, desire and abiltity. This touched me in a special way and I thank you for entering.


  • Great Cthulhu
    March 24, 2007

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    Whoa!

    Incredible! You have wrought a beautiful work here! A few favorite lines: "The Passion burns so deep within
    So close in my heart
    We'll be considered twins" (I loved how you capitalized Passion, adding all important emphasis)
    "I'm not perfect
    But my love for you will be" (a very real, grounded statement)
    "A meal of Passion
    A side of Love
    For dessert you'll have
    Me all night to love"(Excellent imagery!)

    Good luck!

  • Luna Tique Fringe
    March 23, 2007

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    Well...if he doesn't pick you...he's an idiot...lol...(just kidding rabbit)..but seriously...that was sweet, hot and sexy all wrapped up in a pretty package...


  • Poetry and I Inc
    March 22, 2007

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    Amazing

    Being true to only thee
    I'll wait for you
    With a single rose
    When you walk thru the door of my heart
    Watching me while I pose
    A meal of Passion
    A side of Love
    For dessert you'll have
    Me all night to love

    Now that's hot and sexy and beautiful all wrapped up into one shell girl! Fantastic job on your wording as well. Lovely piece to read and says so much to the reader. For sure this is one everyone could say to their loved one. -theQueen"

    • Ephiphany
      March 22, 2007
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      Awww, Thanks

      I really appreciate your comment on this one and all the others, sis. You know me so well...this is what I do and Im not ashamed either, that is the loveable part about me.

      Ephiphany

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