How could a young girl,
fall in love so quickly.
Impossible for someone so powerful,
could ever even notice someone so weak.
I remember when you saved me,
and carried me away.
Helped mend my wounds,
and kept me safe.
When I fell,
you caught me with your strong but gentle arms.
And when I cried,
you held me close and comforted me.
I was but a child,
but I felt like I loved you.
I grew into a young woman,
and we are still together.
When I cry now,
you kiss my cheeks.
And when I fall,
its is only into your arms.
Such a rare thing to happen,
but now we will always be together.
I will never forget when I fell,
right into another love.
Author notes
03/22/07 10:44 am
Just some dream I have about the love a would want to feel and be returned *sigh*
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Aww so cute
This poem i can feel your pain. -
STUNNING
What will we do if we have no dreams. It sounds like a love that came from a childhood crush. I might be wrong but I have a friend that was in this situation, he is 10 years older than her and now she is a young woman and they are together. Love your work little angel. Ami
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That's a beautiful and comforting dream...and they say that dreams can be prophetic so you never know it may come true ;-)
But overall it's a well written poem, you definitely have talant!
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A Wonderful Dream
Hold on to that dream honey, because there are some out there..You are only fifteen..so you can dream for awhile. I will pray that God will answer your prayers.When you talk about your dream love, I think about Jesus, who went out to find his one lost little sheep..He cared so much, and he found her...As He said "My Father knows about even a sparrow dropping to the ground""Are you not more important than many many sparrows?" God loves you, and he will bring your dream to come true...Only don't you try and make it happen..God will...Love you honey for this lovely poem!!
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this is soemthing that just get to me, the words and the feel just flow to me like water, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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Lovely entry! Sounds like a hero. Love is such a nice feeling, and i like writing and reading about it. Nice entry and very creative. I myself am in love this very second and have been for more than a year, and its such a beautiful thing.
Nice write!
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