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No Sense Of Direction

I'm falling into this
With no sense of direction
I have no idea where to go
But I know it doesn't really matter

Wherever I go in this place
I'll always be the same
The faces are mirrors of past friends
And the declarations are set on repeat

But still this doesn't bother me
Because I'll always know where I stand
I have mapped the places where I fell
So someone can come and save me

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Not really sure. I just sat down and I wrote it.

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  • angelsslayer
    April 2, 2007

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    Hmm... I thought it was clear, and then the ending confused me lol. Maybe it's just me and im just being ditzy! I like your wording though. Nice


    • Hopelessly Hopeful
      April 2, 2007
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      angelsslayer

      It doesn't bother me where I am because it's where I've always been. But I know that it isn't right so I have left clues so someone can help me make it through. if that makes any more sense.


      • angelsslayer
        April 2, 2007
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        Ahhh

        Right, Thanks for clearing it up! It does make sense now lol. I was just having a "thick" moment