She keeps her secrets,
Tries to let go of the past,
Knowing that good things seldom ever last,
But there's that hope,
One day she'll find,
That one thing she's missing inside,
So she holds on to her secrets,
No need to relive the past,
Because with with all that has happened,
Who wants to go back,
She tries to forget,
But it's harder then it sounds,
Then she takes a look around,
At herself, and who she is today,
There's nothing she could have done,
No need to be ashamed,
Of a mom who loved drugs more then her own family,
A father who drank away his sorrows,
And smoked away the pain,
Friends she left behind,
Mistakes she made herself,
Growing up too fast,
A childhood long ago in the past,
So she let's go of those secrets,
And gives them away,
To a person she hopes will never betray
This has come from my heart, and I would really appreciate any critacism THANK YOU!!!!!!
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very nice
I can't pick favorite parts but i found this piece very heartfelt. some people go through so much and their lives are unbearable. with hope you stay strong and pull yourself up and out of the mess and become someone and make a good life , learn from the mistakes of your parents.I realy like your title it drew me to this poem first i'll check more later.I like it all. i can't sugest anything. but hope that one can pull out of the mess that their life is or was.i think it is terrible for a parent to be this way.i'm very lucky to have a child.lots of health reasons.
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