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Bare Without You(Rondelet)

Bare without you
That's what my life has come to be
Bare without you
There's nothing left but sad and blue
No euphoria, ecstasy
Will you ever come back to me
Bare without you

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  • SensualWhispers
    April 7, 2007

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    awww

    this is great. your poem is sad and very emotional which is what i had expected to be with this poem. you've done a great job. thanks for entering the contest and the best of luck to you. kassie