Wedding Jitters
Nerves on edge
Nails bitten to the quick
Is this going to work
Heart pounding
Stomach in a knot
Head reeling in the clouds
Words of promise
Simple, “I do’s”
A lifetime together
Deep breaths
Calm the panic
This is the woman I love
Rings exchanged
Kisses on lips
Our life together now starts
Please tell me what you think
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Congratulations
FINALLY! It's about bloody time. Congrats Angelhunny!
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Brilliant Writing
Ah, this is great. I like the sort of urgency you have put in this, Ang. I sort of breathlessness with this piece. Maybe it is anxiety for the future to come, now that the marriage is upon you. But I really like this. I like how you put this across to the reader. All the emotions and feelings rolled up into this small piece of brilliant writing. Brilliant again, Ang.
Your Big Bro,
Wayne
xx
Never stop writing, sis.
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Thank you my dearest Brother your comments are always looked forward to and appreciated.
ang
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Well Done
nice one my friend, as someone who has known you for years I can appreciate what this write truly means. i also know how much of yourself you have given in this write!!! Congrats, love you lots ~hugs~
Dins
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thanks naids
i was so nervous it was really rather funny!
ang
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Yep you are finally together
So you tied the knot and the nerves are all over. May you be happy together. Good write.
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thanks Maro, its been a hard and long struggle to get where we are, but we both know what we want and have gone for it.
ang
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OMFG!!!!
That means TODAY IS YOUR WEDDING DAY!!!????
CONGRATS ANG!
this is a cool write,
i did one like it not long ago
must be the time of year huh? hehehe
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yip Lexie, 12:30pm on the 23rd march
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yip Lexie, 12:30pm on the 23rd march
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yip Lexie, 12:30pm on the 23rd march
ang
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Is this just a poem or actually a true story. If it is true, get those nails manicured and stop worrying. The secret to a successfull marriage is:
1. Respect
2. Never go to bed angry
3. Never go out alone, do everything together. Keep friends at armslength, your partner must be your best friend.
4. Tell your partner what you don't like, it may hurt them or be angry for a while but how can someone change if they are not told what the problem is.
5. Open sexual relationship - Talk about what she wants and how and tell her what you like. Tell her what you need.
6. Buy her sexy lingerie and ask her to strip dance for you at candle light, that will keep you out of strip club.
7. Treat each other as if today may be the last with patience.
8. If you believe in God, make Him a part of your life as without food for the soul, you are lost. See the Christ in each others eyes.
I HAVE BEEN MARRIED FOR 20 YEARS, this is my recipe
hope it helps.
Love always
Ami
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thanks for the advice Ami
both my wife and i have learnt that honesty and open communication is still the only way to have any relationsip work.
We have known each other for 9 years and gone through a lot together.
thanks for reading and commenting Ami, its truly appreciated.
ang
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Hey Ang, been a long time since we chatted ( I used to be recovering slowly ). I just wanted to drop in and say I love this piece and to wish you all the luck in the world for your wedding and the future. I hope you have everything you ever dreamed of. Love Claire
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thank you claire my wife and i have been wanting this since 9 years ago - but alas it was not legal at that stage.
Hope that you have all you dreamed and hoped for my friend
ang
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Good Luck
Would be worried if you werent nervous!!!!
Remember to breathe!!!!
Enjoy
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i did breath and laugh and giggle a lot, it was an interesting day in the end with lots of paperwork!
ang
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great piece!! I really enjoy it!!! great job!! great poem!!
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thank you for stopping by reading and commenting seeing that i am getting married tomorrow i thought that i would put my thoughts on paper.
ang
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