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Over the Rainbow

Birds can fly and fish can swim,
but on this planet, where do I fit in?
Where in this place, can I find peace?
All of this land, where's my piece?

Ah, there it is!
Over the rainbow
just past the flying pigs
Across the plains, flying low.

Oh there its gone,
Opportunity missed.
Maybe next time,
I'll reach the hazy mist.

Author notes

I found the first two lines in an MSN name, so I made a poem out of it!

Dedicated to Bubbles, because I think of her everytime I read this poem.

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  • aurora frog
    March 22, 2007
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    did you know the first 2 lines are lyrics from a shakespears sister song?
    otherwise very poetic...not in the literal meaning of its a poem poetic, but in the imagery, i like it.

    your chasing rainbows...just like me

    Bubbles xxx


  • cactus thorn
    March 22, 2007
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    A very enjoyable poem.
    Humor, imagery, rhythm, rhyming and theme!

    Great job