Summertime dreams
Fly from our minds,
Bluebirds fly
In the summer sky.
As flowers grow
Upon the fields
Lovers know
How they feel.
And summertime seasons
Window paynes
Keep out the falling rain.
With peace alive In every mind,
Everyone is free.
Laughter abides In every soul,
With no one's heart In need.
Author notes
It works if you work it!! Keep comming back!!
A contest entry
- love, life, cigarettes & summer by magdelene.
800 points, ended April 12, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Yey, a very imaginative write! And reading between the lines.. o naughtyness.. I love the style, the way lines flow together.. Very well done !
Love
x
Evert

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coll cool cool
Short sweet and full of hope and love. Very up lifting dear friend.
Miss ya
Jan

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awe that is so sweet! i love it, you just keep pumpin out the works! nice job keep it up



