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Summertime Dreams

Summertime dreams
Fly from our minds,
Bluebirds fly
In the summer sky.

As flowers grow
Upon the fields
Lovers know
How they feel.

And summertime seasons
Window paynes
Keep out the falling rain.

With peace alive In every mind,
Everyone is free.

Laughter abides In every soul,
With no one's heart In need.


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  • Old Fool
    April 19, 2007

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    Yey, a very imaginative write! And reading between the lines.. o naughtyness.. I love the style, the way lines flow together.. Very well done !
    Love
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    Evert


  • Janice M Pickett
    March 24, 2007
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    coll cool cool

    Short sweet and full of hope and love. Very up lifting dear friend.
    Miss ya
    Jan


  • lovingwife
    March 23, 2007
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    awe that is so sweet! i love it, you just keep pumpin out the works! nice job keep it up