Pine
needles dance
in the wind
A contest entry
- Another Hay[na]ku (my 50th contest on AP) by cherche -d -ame.
1050 points, ended March 24, 2007, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
-
thank you for entering this contest. This creates a sort of pretty picture [in spite of it possibly being a cold and windy day]If we observe nature we can always find the one thing that can inspire us , or at least make us think of things in a differen way, in this case the pine needles dancing instead of just "blowing" in the wind. Best wishes in the contest,
reenie

