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A single hour of pain

A single drop of rain
Can hide a million tears
Of what has occured
throughout horrendus years

 

A single hour of my day

will make your head explode

of what i have endured

from hands that should have known

 

A single day of my week

is filled with tears of blood

of loss and stolen years

and never-ending crud

 

A single year of pain

is enough to kill my spark

you tortured me daily

and left me in the dark

 

And years turned to decades

Of sexual abuse

of lost childhood innocence

And this was your excuse

 

A single hour of pain

was inflicted unto me

and he showed me that

i could inflict my pain on thee

 

A single drop of rain
Can hide a million tears
Of what has occured
throughout horrendus years

 

 

 

 

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  • KittieLyyn
    March 26, 2007

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    wow. i love how you repeated the beginning at the end. very effective. great work. very well written. thank you so very much for entering my contest and good luck to you.


  • BarbedWireButterfly
    March 22, 2007

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    very interesting. please put the option number. i know what it is but i must be fair to the other contestants. good language and emotion thank you for entering and good luck