Lady soul do you know my name
Your playing me at my own game
You don't look at me no anymore
Your threatening me to walk out that door
Your kisses are sweet and smile is so nice
The taste of your lips is like sugar and spice
My lady soul don't you walk out that door
Your leaving me out and I'm down on the floor
Just hold me tight like you always used to
Please show to me that our love is so true
Lady Soul let me show you ,just how i can feel
I,ll show you how my love is so real
A contest entry
- Lyricists and Songwriters!! by Andy Stephenson.
800 points, ended May 12, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Thanks
Thanks for entering my contest. I really appreciate it. Do you have a melody? Do lady soul and he get together? Lady soul is a good title and hook.
Andy
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Good
A very nice song/poem .... Well done
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in the heart
you have these feeligs so well expressed , but you are a musician .and the soul comes so naturally..heartfelt stuff deep
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