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Fore in fire

wine
two glasses

three hearts stumble

fore
in fire
shifting the ire

A contest entry

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  • cherche -d -ame
    March 22, 2007

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    thank you for entering the contest. I liked the idea that this was something that made me think a bit to sort of draw a conclusion as to what it could mean. Not all has to be exactly explained in writing...we get the richer sometimes by having to use our own imagination as the reader. Thanks again and best wishes,
    reenie

  • lostskylark
    March 22, 2007
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    i'm a little confused on this one. but i'm probably overlooking something


    • Purush
      March 22, 2007
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      triangular love!

      it is to depict the triangular love
      All burning their hearts in fire of ire
      Am i clear at all?

      • lostskylark
        March 22, 2007
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        ok i guess confused isn't the right word. it's just the message doesn't jump at you.